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		<title>By: Belajar Nulis &#171; Feel My Soul</title>
		<link>http://www.deeshaa.org/2008/02/25/on-writing-well/comment-page-1/#comment-130224</link>
		<dc:creator>Belajar Nulis &#171; Feel My Soul</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 12 Oct 2008 18:19:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] besar cara marah kita mirip dengan ortu. Tips yang mirip tentang ini mungkin yang ditulis oleh Atanu Dey The best way to learn how to write is to read good writing. It has to be deliberate reading. Not [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] besar cara marah kita mirip dengan ortu. Tips yang mirip tentang ini mungkin yang ditulis oleh Atanu Dey The best way to learn how to write is to read good writing. It has to be deliberate reading. Not [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Atanu on Writing Well &#171; World is Green</title>
		<link>http://www.deeshaa.org/2008/02/25/on-writing-well/comment-page-1/#comment-114809</link>
		<dc:creator>Atanu on Writing Well &#171; World is Green</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 26 Feb 2008 09:46:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] 26, 2008 at 7:15 pm (Green Thinking)    Some of us want to write well. Atanu has some pointers. That is all: Good writing is the product of some very hard thinking. Lazy thinkers cannot be good [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] 26, 2008 at 7:15 pm (Green Thinking)    Some of us want to write well. Atanu has some pointers. That is all: Good writing is the product of some very hard thinking. Lazy thinkers cannot be good [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Ike</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ike</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 25 Feb 2008 23:10:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>One more piece, for those looking for a way to pare it down to the essentials:  http://occamsrazr.com/2007/10/17/a-gem-of-a-message/</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>One more piece, for those looking for a way to pare it down to the essentials:  <a href="http://occamsrazr.com/2007/10/17/a-gem-of-a-message/" rel="nofollow">http://occamsrazr.com/2007/10/17/a-gem-of-a-message/</a></p>
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		<title>By: ghostwriter</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 25 Feb 2008 22:48:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You are quite right about using short, simple sentences - as opposed to wordy and complex prose. 

V.S. Naipaul is my favorite writer of narrative - precisely for this reason.  Incidentally, he gave the same advise to a young writer when asked how to write well. 

The goal of writing a blog is to bring awareness to the reader. Awareness - the word used here is different from knowledge,  information or data.  If you write long-winding sentences - half the reader&#039;s energy is spent in merely recognizing and putting together words. That is an awful waste. 

In the case of Niradbabu - well the man was a scholar and academic, but very pretentious. His writing was not for the people. As an Indian - he gave me no sense of myself. He gave Indians very little knowledge of the world they found themselves in. I could not relate myself to his life and found nothing of myself in his books. Perhaps that is the failure. If you read Naipaul&#039;s book Beyond Belief - you will understand why Pakistanis hate us without ever having gone to Pakistan. You will find a lot of yourself in the characters that he describes in his travel writing about India. That is the mark of a genius.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You are quite right about using short, simple sentences &#8211; as opposed to wordy and complex prose. </p>
<p>V.S. Naipaul is my favorite writer of narrative &#8211; precisely for this reason.  Incidentally, he gave the same advise to a young writer when asked how to write well. </p>
<p>The goal of writing a blog is to bring awareness to the reader. Awareness &#8211; the word used here is different from knowledge,  information or data.  If you write long-winding sentences &#8211; half the reader&#8217;s energy is spent in merely recognizing and putting together words. That is an awful waste. </p>
<p>In the case of Niradbabu &#8211; well the man was a scholar and academic, but very pretentious. His writing was not for the people. As an Indian &#8211; he gave me no sense of myself. He gave Indians very little knowledge of the world they found themselves in. I could not relate myself to his life and found nothing of myself in his books. Perhaps that is the failure. If you read Naipaul&#8217;s book Beyond Belief &#8211; you will understand why Pakistanis hate us without ever having gone to Pakistan. You will find a lot of yourself in the characters that he describes in his travel writing about India. That is the mark of a genius.</p>
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		<title>By: Ike</title>
		<link>http://www.deeshaa.org/2008/02/25/on-writing-well/comment-page-1/#comment-114789</link>
		<dc:creator>Ike</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 25 Feb 2008 16:51:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Don&#039;t worry.  They don&#039;t teach a great deal of logic over here in the USA, either.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Don&#8217;t worry.  They don&#8217;t teach a great deal of logic over here in the USA, either.</p>
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